Brennan sinks down onto the plaid common room sofa.
This is wrong. This is reversed. Brennan is older. She's supposed to be the one supporting Hannah right now. Not the other way around.
She rests her elbows on her knees and leans forward. Not full on 'put your head between your knees,' but it helps enough that she's probably not going to fall completely apart.
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Date: 2008-10-29 01:48 am (UTC)Brennan sinks down onto the plaid common room sofa.
This is wrong. This is reversed. Brennan is older. She's supposed to be the one supporting Hannah right now. Not the other way around.
She rests her elbows on her knees and leans forward. Not full on 'put your head between your knees,' but it helps enough that she's probably not going to fall completely apart.